The Artist Fisherman

By Adina Pelle

If you saw someone carrying piles of fishing tools, backpack on his back, straw hat on his head and rubber boots on his feet, you would be willing to bet he had something to do with a professional fisherman.  But you would be dead wrong and lose the bet in the case of our artist fisherman…

Our character could care less about fish.  Instead, the unruffled waters of the lake at the edge of town were like a magnet attracting him every time.  His raft followed always, careful not to create any ripples, the smooth surface of his thoughts.

His wife knew by now there will be no fish for dinner.  First, she tried a rejoinder by attacking the absurdity of her man’s behavior.

“What kind of sound mind guides you, why do you need a bog if you do not catch any fish?  You spent a lot of money on tinseled fishing poles and tools but instead they clutter my closet”…

The man gave his wife a long and puzzled look.  He could not believe she failed to see the substance of his weekly departures.

“Dear,” he shook his hand in total annoyance,” but I do not want to catch fish.  I throw the line just to get past the surface of my thoughts, thoughts swimming below the marshy bottom of my conscience.”

The woman shrugged   her shoulders – So I had to marry an artist, I guess an engineer, or a teacher was not close by me!  My mom was right!

She walked over and took a big fish from the freezer, to be ready when the fisher of thoughts came back, with the red sun behind him and without a spectacular catch.–

Invariably for our artist fisherman, coming back home after sailing his own waters was accompanied by a broad smile.  After many hours spent in the shade of the same shaggy willow, pulling out  of water thought  after thought, the man felt weightless, free of burdens  and fears as if his mind  had been washed by an  endless  rain.

Paradoxically, so that everything was as real as possible, he learned all the tricks of fishing; He knew how to do everything just like an expert.  So assuming he tried real fishing, he would have certainly had a fair chance at catching many fish.

But instead he did not step over that barrier he self-imposed.  Standing on the banks of the lake fishing thoughts was what he was after.

Once home, with a smile on his lips, he would kiss his woman on the cheek, take a sip of brandy, and disappear in his office.

Hunched over his laptop, he would strip bloody splatters of sentences and gory, glistening words from fresh-caught thoughts.


3 Responses to The Artist Fisherman

  1. jgavinallan says:

    Very descriptive sentences. Excuse me, you do not need a whole sentence to set up a particular action or scene. Ex. “…thoughts swimming below the marshy bottom of my conscience.” Putting the laptop in the midst of your description (Yikkie-a very good description) of…I guess cleaning fish. Great picture in the reader’s mind.

    Just very good—
    Good Lick

  2. Adina says:

    Very good observation Jaye, I have a tendency to use more words than needed…..

  3. Cara Dirisi says:

    I love it.Makes me think of Jesus saying come with me and I’ll make you fishers of men.Interesting.

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